高三英語階段性檢測試卷評(píng)講

1、高三英語階段性檢測試卷評(píng)講 --- 書面表達(dá),1,Task of writing,教育部在2007年工作要點(diǎn)中明確提出：加強(qiáng)教育改革和發(fā)展，開展師范生免費(fèi)教育的試點(diǎn)，引導(dǎo)各地建立鼓勵(lì)優(yōu)秀人才當(dāng)教師的新機(jī)制。 假定你是中國某高中的學(xué)生李華，你的朋友約翰在網(wǎng)上看到了與以上信息相關(guān)的消息。下面是他

2、剛發(fā)給你的電子郵件，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)。詞數(shù)：120左右。Dear Li Hua,I just happened to learn that China’s decided to give free education to normal university students in the near future and I’m really interested in your response to the news. What do

3、 your schoolmates think of the policy? Do you want to be a teacher yourself? John,2,Analysis of key points,Your resp

4、onse (as well as several reasons);Your classmates’ opinions (maybe divided);Will you be a teacher yourself ?,3,Analysis of students’ writing,Dear John, I have received your letter, which you want to know my resp

5、onse to the news.Well, I’m really pride to discuss this hot policy with you.My ideas are : 1. The policy’s appearance will result in the Chinese education system’s change, and the change will let our nation be more prosp

6、erous. 2. There are many students from poor families can go to universities. When my classmates learnt the news, they were very excited. They said they were glad to be teachers because teachers were great jobs. It was t

7、eacher that spread knowledge and help us out of confusion. But I don’t want to be a teacher because I’m not interested. How about you ?Are you considering to be a teacher?

8、 Li Hua,4,Dear John, I have received your letter, which you want to know my response to the news.Well, I’m really pride to discuss this hot policy with you.,I’m glad to receive yo

9、ur letter saying that you…,proud,5,My ideas are : 1. The policy’s appearance will result in the Chinese education system’s change, and the change will let our nation be more prosperous. 2. There are many students

10、from poor families can go to universities.,As far as I’m concerned, the policy will result in,great change in the Chinese educational system ,,and then our nation will be more prosperous.,Many students from poor familie

11、s can go to universities.,6,When my classmates learnt the news, they were very excited. They said they were glad to be teachers because teachers were great jobs. It was teacher that spread knowledge and help us out o

12、f confusion.,…They say that they are glad to be teachers,because teaching is a great job.,It is a teacher who / that spreads knowledge and helps us out of confusion.,7,But I don’t want to be a teacher because I’m not i

13、nterested. How about you ? Are you considering to be a teacher ? Li Hua,My interest doesn’t lie i

14、n teaching, much as I admire teachers. How about you ?,Are you considering being a teacher in your area ?,8,Conclusion of mistakes,Simple and direct translation;A confusing structure;Illogical order;Verb tenses not in

15、 agreement;Chinglish expressions;Improper sentence patterns;Drifting off the topic or leaving out some required information.,9,Enjoying a model writing,Dear John , I’m very glad that you’re so much concerned w

16、ith the policy. Brought into effect about one year ago, it has drawn attention of the whole nation, since education is closely linked to the development of a country. My classmates are mostly inspired by the news

17、.They hold the idea that it has provided a good opportunity for those students who have a desire to be teachers but can’t afford the high tuition. As a consequence of these talented students taking up teaching, we can su

18、rely expect a great promotion in the area of education. I myself come from a poor family and being a teacher is my dream from childhood. Thanks to the policy, I’ll have a chance to devote myself to teaching and I’

19、ll be more than glad to do that. Li Hua,__ ________ ____,_______ ___ _____,____ _______ __,_ _____ _____,___ ___

20、,____,____ _ _____ __,__ _ ___________ __ ___________________ _____ __,_____ __,_____ __,____ ____,10,Practical ways to help,In your daily study: 1. build up a good vocabulary and grammar system;2. obtain

21、 materials from your textbooks: recite 10-20 sentences per unit;3. exchange your writings with your classmates and learn from each other;4. check your writings with the model writing and study any good points in it.

22、5. read all that are available.,11,Practical ways to help,While taking an exam:1. make sure you have enough time for writing;2. study the requirements carefully;3. organize the information in a proper order and prepa

23、re a rough draft;4. put it on your answer sheet in a beautiful handwriting;5. check by reading it again.,12,Practice of another task,Henry Smith先生在China Daily上求聘一位家庭教師，為他的小男孩教漢語，你根據(jù)廣告寫封應(yīng)聘信，說明你的簡歷如下，請(qǐng)他考慮回復(fù)。（信文要求流暢準(zhǔn)確，120