四六級(jí)作文評(píng)析

1、六級(jí)作文評(píng)析,,,六級(jí)作文題型： 六級(jí)作文題目出現(xiàn)的形式主要是論說(shuō)文（解決問(wèn)題型作文；分析利弊型作文；正反闡釋型作文），書(shū)信和圖表作文交替出現(xiàn)。(書(shū)信及圖表是解決問(wèn)題型作文的一種子題型，把握好這類(lèi)論說(shuō)文就可以舉一反三、觸類(lèi)旁通地攻克圖表及書(shū)信作文)。,,評(píng)析六級(jí)作文范文Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute

2、s to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 　　1、閱讀經(jīng)典書(shū)籍對(duì)人的成長(zhǎng)至關(guān)重要　　2、現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來(lái)越少，原因是……　　3、我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做,,這道作文題是典型的“解決問(wèn)題型”，

3、這一類(lèi)文章的寫(xiě)作思路就是描述現(xiàn)狀－分析原因－提出解決方案，文章采用“三段總分式”展開(kāi)?？梢钥闯觯}目給出的三點(diǎn)提綱其實(shí)很好地契合了這個(gè)思路。,,第一段，簡(jiǎn)要提出經(jīng)典的重要性。如：1. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that reading classics plays an important role in the growth of people. 2.

4、Nowadays, some people, especially the elderly, are of the view that classics play a significant role in our life.之后展開(kāi)說(shuō)明閱讀經(jīng)典是如何影響成長(zhǎng)的，可以用幾本名著來(lái)輔證自己的觀點(diǎn)。,,第二段，先總的說(shuō)一下現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來(lái)越少了，切忌less and less這樣的惡俗語(yǔ)言。 緊接著分析原因，可

5、以想到的原因有很多，比如現(xiàn)代人的生活節(jié)奏越來(lái)越快，以致于忙得沒(méi)有時(shí)間靜下心來(lái)讀書(shū)；新興的媒體，比如網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人們閱讀習(xí)慣的改變；現(xiàn)代社會(huì)快餐式文化產(chǎn)品的興起對(duì)經(jīng)典的沖擊，等等。,,最后一段寫(xiě)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。 分點(diǎn)分層次寫(xiě)總是最簡(jiǎn)單的方法，可以說(shuō)大學(xué)生首先自己要閱讀經(jīng)典，同時(shí)可以鼓勵(lì)和影響身邊的人閱讀經(jīng)典；也可以說(shuō)政府文化部門(mén)應(yīng)該做什么，大學(xué)應(yīng)該做什么來(lái)鼓勵(lì)閱讀經(jīng)典，然后大學(xué)生本身要提高對(duì)經(jīng)典的重視程度，等等。,,1

6、、閱讀經(jīng)典書(shū)籍對(duì)人的成長(zhǎng)至關(guān)重要 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that reading classics plays an important and beneficial role in our development and growth. Personally, ever since my childhood, nothing has been more attra

7、ctive than reading the classic masterpieces. Taking a look around, we can find classics from which people hugely benefit too numerous to list: The Dream in the Red Chamber, The Legend of Three Kingdoms, Bible and the lik

8、e.,,2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來(lái)越少，原因是…… However, it is widely acknowledged that an increasing number of people are losing interest in classics. A number of factors could account for the change, but the following are the most criti

9、cal ones. For one thing, practical reading has occupied the market and students’ spare time in such a material possession oriented society. For another, the boom of internet industry gives rise to the change in students’

10、 reading habit which consequently, in comparison, makes reading classics time-consuming and less entertaining.,,3. 我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做 In view of / because of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken b

11、efore things get worse. To begin with, it is essential that college rules and regulations be worked out and enforced to encourage college students to read classical works and start classics-reading campaigns on campus. W

12、hat’s more, college students should enhance their awareness of absorbing the essence of the classics in which our ancestors left their wisdoms and experience. With proper rules and an alert public, it will only be a matt

13、er of time to see this problem become a thing of the past in the near future.,,Increased College Enrollment1）. 近年來(lái)大學(xué)入學(xué)率逐年上升2）. 大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的益處及潛在問(wèn)題3）. 我對(duì)大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的看法這是一篇典型利弊兩分法的議論文。,,第一段引入主題：高校擴(kuò)招。第二段分析高校擴(kuò)招的益處：緩解了父母和高中生們的心理壓力；提高

14、全國(guó)教育水平；培養(yǎng)更多有專(zhuān)長(zhǎng)的人才。第三段擴(kuò)招造成的一些問(wèn)題：造成大學(xué)里師資和教學(xué)設(shè)施短缺；使就業(yè)市場(chǎng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更加激烈。第四段闡述我的觀點(diǎn)。,,Recent years has witnessed a steady increase in college enrollment. To many high-school students, it’s definitely good news， for they would have bet

15、ter chance of receiving higher education. You don’t have to look very far to find out the advantages of the increased college enrollment. For one thing, it lessens the worries of both high school graduates and

16、their parents. For another，college enrollment expansion can contribute to raising the educational level of our nation. What’s more, increased college enrollment can provide more students with specialized knowledge, thus

17、serving our development in a positive way.,,On the other hand, we can not deny that there are some potential problems about increased college enrollment. To begin with, with the increased number of students, the shortage

18、 of teaching staff and facilities becomes clearly seen. Worst of all, increased college enrollment leads to increased competition in the job market.,,It’s not an easy task to tell whether the tendency should be encourage

19、d or not. As to me, it’s laudable / deserving praise to grant more students higher education. But a college degree is by no means a guarantee for a better job or future. To cast a promising career, we need a lot more abi

20、lities which we can not learn from college.,,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words fol

21、lowing the outline given below. 1、 有人做好事期望得到回報(bào)； 2、 有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào)； 3、 我的觀點(diǎn)。,,這是一篇典型的正反闡釋作文第一段總起說(shuō)一句對(duì)于是否應(yīng)該期望得到回報(bào)這個(gè)話題有不同的看法，然后馬上接著說(shuō)第一種觀點(diǎn)。When it comes to whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed, pe

22、ople’s opinions differ.這個(gè)句子相信大家再熟悉不過(guò)。第二段直接寫(xiě)第二種的對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)。最后一段寫(xiě)我的觀點(diǎn)，可以贊同第一種，或者同意第二種觀點(diǎn)，也可以兩種都有條件地支持， 實(shí)在覺(jué)得最后一段字?jǐn)?shù)寫(xiě)不夠了，也可以說(shuō)現(xiàn)在存在什么問(wèn)題，并想出解決方法。,,Lei Feng, a communist soldier, who “devoted his limited life to the limitless cause of

23、 serving the people”, has long been set as an outstanding example to encourage us to spare no efforts to help those in need；whereas, with the passage of time, people voice different opinions towards doing good deeds.,,So

24、me insists “A good turn deserves another”, as the old saying goes, which indicates that a good deed ought to bring about a reward, the motivation or the stimulus for the favor. Meanwhile, others believe good deeds belong

25、 to voluntary work, purely out of willingness, which has nothing to do with expectation for rewards.,,As to me, good deeds are supposed to result from spontaneous reaction confronted with certain circumstances, ranging f

26、rom giving up one seat to a silver-haired passenger aboard the bus, donating blood to the designated organization by Red Cross，to traveling to the remote and poverty-stricken areas to serve as a volunteer for a whole yea

27、r. In short, rewards are by no means the trigger or purpose for intention of conducting good deeds, no matter how trivial they are.,,高分作文的四句話基本準(zhǔn)則 ：　　 結(jié)構(gòu)合理三（四）段式；　　 中心突出主題句；　　 層次清晰導(dǎo)航語(yǔ)；　　 詞匯閃光亮點(diǎn)句。,六級(jí)寫(xiě)作必備句型,“It”

28、 is used as a subject:It cannot be denied that/ must be admitted that the overgrowth of tourism may destroy the ecological balance of some scenic resorts.It is known to all that physical exercises can improve and enric

29、h our physical and mental well-being.It is obvious (evident, clear, undeniable, apparent) that the situation is caused directly by excessive commercial fishing.,,It is currently difficult for a university student to fin

30、d an ideal job upon his graduation, especially those majoring in fundamental courses such as history and mathematics.It is imperative that something urgent be done to combat the widespread use of illegal drugs among tee

31、nagers.It is highly necessary for our government to stop the corruption of government officials.,,with/as… With the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is get

32、ting tighter and tighter.As the reform process of state enterprises speeds up, more and more workers are likely to be laid off, entering the competition in job marketAs industry and agriculture develops, the problem of

33、 water shortage will be more serious.,,there be Recently, there has been a strong debate on whether human beings should be cloned. There are still quite a number of children who cannot afford to go to school because of

34、 poverty. There is no need for people to worry about the possible effects of donating blood.,,make＋object＋adj./ make＋it +adj.＋for sb. to do sthThe widespread introduction of information t

35、echnology will make our work and life more convenient and more beautiful. Advanced medical science has made it possible for human beings to lead a much longer life and suffer less from different kinds of diseases.,,so…t

36、hat …They are so eager to master new skills that they can be qualified to the job market. There are so many people, bicycles, cars in the streets that you will sometimes feel it difficult to move along.,,Nonrestrictiv

37、e Attributive ClauseLakes and rivers are becoming seriously polluted, which aggravates (worsens) the shortage of fresh water.The increasingly high divorce rate will cause a series of problems, which deserves great publ

38、ic attention.,,Participle phrase:People, not realizing that water resources on the earth are limited, waste a great amount of water every day. With the improvement of living standards, more and more people begin to buy

39、 cars to meet the needs of work and life, thereby worsening the traffic problems.,,Contrast structure:Some people believe that reading selectively is a good way for us to enrich our knowledge while some others insist th

40、at reading extensively is way too better. Most men would like their spouses to be young and beautiful whereas women often put emphasis on their spouses’ character, education, profession, income or family background.,,Se

41、ntence structure about “reason”:Several reasons/factors are responsible for/may account for/contribute to the coming back of many Chinese overseas students. Its popularity is due to/results from/is caused by/can be att

42、ributed to the clean and comfortable environment and the excellent service.,,As for (as to) ; for …Thus, for some students, cheating, though risky, is absolutely a shortcut to get a satisfying academic evaluation.As fo

43、r (as to) the society, the 7-day holiday well serves the purpose of stimulating consumption and promoting the development of tourism.,,When it comes to …; as far as …is concerned When it comes to whether college stude

44、nts should be involved in business activities, there are different opinions/ people voice different opinions . As far as individuals are concerned, no matter what reasons drive them to buy lottery tickets, they actual

45、ly contribute to the society by lending a helping hand to unfortunate people and to the development of sports in our country.,It goes without saying that …,Admittedly/Undoubtedly , there are advanced research environment

46、 and better living conditions in developed countries, and students from developing countries can not resist the temptation of earning more salary in the west. No one can deny that/There is no denying the fact that E-ec

47、onomy has great potentials and advantages in many aspects.,,It is indisputable that（無(wú)可爭(zhēng)辯）there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure. No one can

48、deny the fact （沒(méi)有人能否認(rèn)）that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life. In fact, we have to admit the fact （我們必須承認(rèn)）that the quality of life is as important as life itself,,With …; Without … With p

49、rivate cars, people are able to enjoy their leisure time to the full by making trips in their cars to the countryside or seaside at the weekends.Without adequate latest information necessary in his work, one will achiev

50、e no success in his career.,,regard/think of… as… In spite of these arguments, there are those who see (view) it as a hasty decision, which has some potential problems. However, some people consider mankind’s explorati

51、on into the space as a waste of time, money and resources.,,How to express opinions:There are different opinions on (People have different ideas about / Different people may hold different views about) whether drunk dri

52、ving should be banned. Recently, there has been a heated debate (discussion) over whether or not sports stars can go to college or graduate school without taking the entrance exams. Views on the issue in question var

53、y widely from person to person.,,Quite a lot of people hold/claim/argue /advocate /suggest/believe that owning private cars is of great benefit, while others assume/maintain /stress that there may be problems with the in

54、creasing number of private cars/ (but others set/(put forth a different argument about/ oppositive views on the matter in question). Some (people) advocate/endorse/favor/are for (或oppose/object to/are against)... Yet o

55、thers stick to/hold on to/cling to the opposite views/argument/points.,,To some people's mind /From some people's point of view/ In the eyes of some people, the matter in question is/seems/should be/means...But t

56、o others' mind /from others' point of view/in others' eyes, it is just/quite the other/contrary/opposite way around (或the opposite/reverse is the case/true.)Based on the above discussion, I hold the opinio

57、n that both sides of the argument are right in some way. However, I would like to take a more neutral position.,,Some other important sentences:The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over th

58、e recent years. (近些年引起了廣泛關(guān)注） Despite many obvious advantages of …, it is not without its problem. (但是它也存在問(wèn)題)Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring

59、about many negative impacts. (然而他們也不可避免的帶來(lái)了一些負(fù)面影響),,These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along wi

60、th the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it. （這是現(xiàn)代社會(huì)發(fā)展必然的結(jié)果，無(wú)法避免） In conclusion, we must take into account this problem rationally（我們應(yīng)理智考慮這一問(wèn)題）and place more emphases

61、 on peasants' lives. Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price. （任何政府忽視這一點(diǎn)都將付出巨大的代價(jià)）,,In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with

62、 it, educators come up with another approach/solution to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education. In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better

63、move/advance toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.,,Only when the old age problem is well handled can we maintain a stable and harmonious society. If people from all walks of life pay enough attention t

64、o this problem, our life in the city will certainly be more enjoyable. Judging from all evidence offered, we can safely come to/(arrive at/reach/draw) the conclusion that coeducation is beneficial to the psychological