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1、寫作的重要性寫作的重要性6分最低限,只要結(jié)構(gòu)不出錯(cuò),得分應(yīng)該為9分。評判作文評判作文四級考試作文主要看內(nèi)容內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、、結(jié)構(gòu)、語言語言三個(gè)方面。內(nèi)容內(nèi)容不跑題即可,注意:1.不要妄圖以情動人;2.不要妄圖在構(gòu)思上出奇制勝。結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)上牢記總分總總分總:先寫主題句(TopicSentence),再寫分論點(diǎn),最后寫總結(jié)句(Conclusion)。語言語言最重要,往往使評分產(chǎn)生重大差異,語言要模仿和包裝模仿和包裝?;颈磉_(dá)基本表達(dá)人們認(rèn)為:it

2、isgenerallywidelybelievedheldagreedthat越來越:beincreasinglyadj.beontherisethegrowingnumberof萬能理由(萬能理由(Omnipotence)1.方便:convenientconvenience2.效率:efficientefficientlyefficiency3.節(jié)省和浪費(fèi):savetimemoneyspaceeconomicalthriftwaste

3、timemoneyspacecostlylavish4.人的心理健康:independentcooperativecompetitiveconsiderateconfidentcreativesociableperseveranceselfishisolatedconserative5.人的身體健康:healthdiseasestrongstrengthenergetic6.娛樂:colfulpleasurejoyrecreatione

4、ntertainmentmrelaxtiredbinglonely7.環(huán)境:environmentpollutepoisonousdirty8.安全和危險(xiǎn):safedangerrisk9.經(jīng)驗(yàn):experiencesocialexperienceenterthesociety10.人際:humanefairunfairhelpassistfreedomfreely寫完之后修改注意:(內(nèi)容方面盡量不要修改)寫完之后修改注意:(內(nèi)容方面盡量

5、不要修改)1、字母大小寫2、怪符號3、單詞拼寫4、主謂一致5、動詞時(shí)態(tài)6、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)實(shí)例一實(shí)例一題目:Bicycles――――AnImptantMeansofTransptinChina提綱:(1)為什么自行車在中國這樣普及(2)和汽車的比較(3)自行車在中國的前途Sce:8BicycleisanimptantmeansoftransptinChina.TheimptantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.

6、TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffdabicycletheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycleuseittogotowkgototravelsoon.Theotherreasonisthelargepopulati

7、onofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimptantmeansoftranspt.Thebicyclecomparedtothecarisnottooexpensiveitiseasytolearntouseitcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimptanttoChi

8、nabecauseofthelackofl.Itisn’ttooexpensivesoChinesecanaffdit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoilitcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.Inthefuturebicyclewillbewidelyused.itwillbeingooddem.Peoplewillproducemuchm

9、emodernbicycles.Sce:14BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwothreebicycles.Duringtherushhouryoucanseethatthoussofpeoplemanwomanoldyoungridetheirbicyclestowkstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomof

10、bicycles”.注:1.第一句總寫,第二句和第三句分寫,最后總寫。2.Duringtherushhour分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭。3.破折號內(nèi)容為同位語句式多變化。3.withthedevelopmentof...隨著……的發(fā)展4.whatsme遞進(jìn)關(guān)系,meover5.bad=pnographic色情的&violent暴力的典型的對比觀點(diǎn)選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu):典型的對比觀點(diǎn)選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu):(轉(zhuǎn))ParagraphIII:(1)承上啟下的

11、過渡句;(2)提出另一種觀點(diǎn)或缺點(diǎn);(3)本段的支持性分論點(diǎn)(4)本段總(可以省略)。Butothersmaynotagreetheyemphasizethattodayssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledgehewillhavemechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfield

12、shemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledgewemustreadextensively.(轉(zhuǎn))(轉(zhuǎn))注:1.But轉(zhuǎn)折詞(信號詞)2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat3.todayssocietyisnotwhatitwas現(xiàn)代社會今昔非比4.許多知識awiderangeofknowledgealargescopeofknowledgemuchkno

13、wledge;獲取知識acquiregetknowledge5.knowsnothing→little;hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉典型的對比觀點(diǎn)選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu):典型的對比觀點(diǎn)選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu):(合)ParagraphIV:(1)平衡兩種看法;(2)給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。Who’srightIthinkbothofthemhavesomethingri

14、ght.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfieldsreadivelyinonefield.(合)(合)Sce:11分Whenitcomestoreadingsomepeoplethinkthatreadingivelyisagoodwaybutsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththemtheythinkthatreadin

15、gextensivelyisbetter.注:結(jié)構(gòu)非常好,可以套用。Thosepeoplewhothinkthatreadingivelyisbetterbelievethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureknowledgewhilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.Sotheysuggestthatw

16、eshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadnevertouchthebadbooks.注:1.“peoplewho...”應(yīng)去掉逗號,改為限制性定語從句。2.asmanyasbadbooks改為asmanyasbadones3.leadustothewrongway改為leadsb.astray4.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat5.touch碰(閃光點(diǎn)詞匯:如教材P7:should

17、eringtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩負(fù)肩負(fù)起責(zé)任)Buttheotherpeoplewhoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetterthinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinfmation.Sotheycaneasilycometo

18、theconclusionthat“toknowmetoreadme”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.注:1.hold認(rèn)為同樣表示“think”的詞還有argueemphasizebelievesuggestclaiminsistmaintainagreehold2.thebestbook在西方國家是“圣經(jīng)”的意思3.toknowmetoreadme錯(cuò)誤,中式英語Tomypoin

19、tweshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythiswaywecanincreasethequalityquantityofreading.范文范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessingaCurseNowitisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimptantpartinpeople’slives.Butt

20、hereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingacurse.注:itisgenerallyacceptedthat人們通常認(rèn)為Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeopletelevisionkeepsonebetterinfmedaboutcurrenteventsallowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopments

21、inpoliticsscienceoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructivestimulating.Themostdistantcountriesthestrangestcustomsthemostattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightintoone’sroom.注:1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople

22、=Somepeoplethinkthat2.“使……”不用make,而用keepallowofferHoweverotherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtog

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