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1、120132013年1212月大學英語四級考試真題月大學英語四級考試真題(二)Part1writing(30minutes)Fthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashtessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slife
2、explaintheConsequenceofoverusingit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wdsbutnomethan180wds.Peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesusingwalkingsticksindertosee.從批改網(wǎng)中選取的學生高分作文，希望同學們比較，鑒別，學習。ExcessivelyUtilizingCellPhonesAs
3、isrevealedinthegraphitisaplaintruththatpeoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesutilizingwalkingsticksindertosee.Consequentlythereisnodoubtthatthephenomenonarousespublicconcernregardingthisissue.Tosomeextentitis
4、anundeniablefactthatthecellphonesisindispensabletoourliveswks.Finstanceitisnoexaggerationtosaythecellphonesundoubtedlyshtenthedistanceofcommunicationamongpeople.Onthecontrarytheissuethatpeopleplacemeemphasisesonthecellph
5、onesalsoexertsnegativeimpactsontheirlives.Ontheonehitisuniversallyacknowledgedthatexcessivelyutilizingcellphonesisdetrimentaltotheeyesight.Ontheotherhexcessivelyutilizingthecellphonesimposesrestrictionsondailylifewhichwi
6、llmakeuspourmeattentionstoitinsteadofwking.Inmyhumbleopinionitisabsolutelyessentialtotakemeasurestoalleviatethisissue.Undoubtedlywhatthemostcrucialthingweshouldbearinmindisthatadvantagesfaroutweighdisadvantages.Tosummari
7、zelayingmeemphasisesonthemeritsofthecellphoneswhichwillfacilitateyourlife.(196wds)計算機田文雨90分(最高分)批改網(wǎng)評語：作者學術詞匯使用比較準確，詞匯表達較豐富，但仍需增加詞匯積累；作者句法基礎不錯，可適當增加復雜句的使用；行文稍欠流暢，應適當增加連接詞的使用；請?zhí)岣呶恼聝?nèi)斂性，段落和句子要圍繞主題展開3Exaggeratedasthepictureis
8、thephenomenonbehinditisratherthoughtprovoking.Withthedevelopmentofhightechnologyequipmentespeciallysmartphonespeopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtotheexcessiveuseofthem.AccdingtoasurveycarriedoutinChinaDailysevera
9、ldaysagoalmost48%ofcitizensexplainthattheywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesath.Meanwhiletheoverusingcellphonesfirstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.Whatswseitwouldperfmanegativeacterininter
10、personalrelationshipsincewehavelesstimetocommunicate.Judgingfromtheevidenceabovemeasuresshouldbetaken.FirstlycertaininstitutionsinChinashouldlaunchrelevantcampaignstolimittheexcessiveuseofcellphones.Meoverascollegestuden
11、tsweshouldputemphasisonitrightfromourselvesasastart.(169wds)電氣陶吉省89分，批改網(wǎng)評語：文章用詞靈活多樣，學術詞匯使用也比較準確；使用了部分簡單的長難句，可適當增加一些復雜的長句；過渡詞和銜接詞使用的比較不錯ExcessiveuseofmobilephoneAsweallknowmobilephonesarethemaininventionofmoderntechnology
12、.TheyarecompletelypartofourdailylivesIfwelookatoursocietywecanseethatallkindsofpeopleareusingmobilephones.Maybetheyhavemanyadvantagesbuttheyalsoexperiencedrawbacks.Exaggeratedasthepictureisthephenomenonbehinditisratherth
13、oughtprocking.Withthedevelopmentofhightechequipmentespeciallysmartphonespeopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtotheexcessiveuseofthem.AccdingtoasurveycarriedoutinChinaDailyseveraldaysagoalmost47%ofcitizensexplainthat
14、theywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesath.Meanwhiletheoverusingofcellphonesfirstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.Whatswseitwouldperfmanegativeacterininterpersonalrelationshipsincewehavelesst
15、imetocommunicate.Sciencetechnologymoderntoolsshouldbeservedasan“angel“toimproveourlivingstardratherthanadeviltodisturbournmallifecommunication.Justimagineliveonedaywithoutmobilephonewillyouberelaxed(185wds)電氣高頌89分，批改網(wǎng)評語：
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