高二短文改錯專練

1、高二短文改錯專練（一）LastSundaymningwhenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhomeIcameacrossacrewmakeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavouriteact.IdidnthavemycamerawithmeatthattimebutIrushedbackhometoget.UnftunatelybythetimeIgotbacktheyhavefinishedth

2、escenetheactcouldntbeseeneverywhere.Iwasreallydisappointingabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding.Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme!Icouldntbelievemyluck—notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhimbuthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!(二)Weallhav

3、eastrongdesiretosucceed.Fsomethedesireisgreatthanthatoftheaveragepeople.Infacteveryonewantstobesuccessfulsoveryfewarewillingtopaythepriceofhardwking.Successisanattitudehasnoreallysecrets.Itallstartwithyourbeliefsystem.Yo

4、urbeliefsystemstartswithwhatyoufeelaboutyourself.Youmustatfirstbelieveinyourself.Onyourjourneytosuccessyouwillfindthattherearenoshtcuts.Youwillneverbeabletocompletelymastereverydetailofyourlife.Attempttodosowillonlyleadt

5、odisappointment.Besidesitsnecessaryofyoutohavecleargoals.Youdbetterputyourgoalsonpaperwheretheyarevisiblesothattheycanhelptomonityourprogress.(三)ItwassnowingheavilyMondaymning.LiHuawasatthebusstopwaitedfBusNo.601togotosc

6、hool.Afterthewhilethebuscameshegotonit.Therearemanypassengersinthebus.Someweretalkingbutsomewerelookingoutofthewindows.Suddenlythebusstopped.Thedriverturnedaroundsaid“Sry.Thebushasbeenbrokendown.Pleasegetoffhelppushthebu

7、s.”WhenweheardthisLiHuatheotherpassengergotoffthebus.Theywkedhardlytogetherpushingthebusslowlybackward.Soonthebuswasrunningagain.Allthepassengersweresmilingthesunwasshining.(四)MyfriendTonyIalwayswalkhometogetherafterscho

8、ol.LastFridayonourwaytohomeweheardaloudshoutbehindus.Whenwelookedaroundtoseewhathadhappenedwefoundawomanliedonthegroundbleeding.Wesoonrealizedthatshehadknockeddownbythecarinfrontofhim.Wehurriedtohelpheramancameovertriedt

9、opreventusfromgettingclosertothewoundedwoman.Wegotveryangrilywiththeman.HowcouldhestoppedusfromhelpingadyingwomanThemanaskedustoturnaroundweweresurprisedtoseeamanwhowerecarryingavideocameraonhisshoulders.Infacttheywereju

10、stshootingafilm！Howaninterestingexperience!(五)DearMr.Li，Imverysrytohavemissedthefirsttwolessonthismning.IgotupearlyasusuallyinthemningbutwhenIwasreadytoleaveIfindmybicyclesfronttyre(輪胎)flat.IwantedtotakebustaxitoschoolId

11、idnthaveanymoneywithme.Ihadtolookfaplacealongthestreettogetmybicyclerepairing.Unluckilytherewerenotanybicyclerepairshopswereopenintheearlymning.SoIhadtowalktoschoolcarryingmybicyclealltheway.ThatshowIwaslatefschool.Pleas

12、edontwrywithmylessonsMr.Li.Iwillmakeupfitturntoteachersfhelpifnecessary.Yours，WangHui答案：（一）LastSundaymningwhenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhomeIcameacrossacrewmakemakinganewfilmwithoneofmyfavourite.Ididnthavemycamerawit

13、hmeatthattimeIrushedbackactactsbutsohometoget.UnftunatelybythetimeIgotbacktheyfinishedthescenetheactcouldntbe∧ithavehadseen.Iwasreallyabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding.Hewaseverywhereanywheredisappointingdisappointed∧

14、ofrightthereinthefrontofme!Icouldntbelievemyluck—notonlydidImyphototakenwithhimbuthehadhavesignedhisnameonmyshirt!答案：(二)Weallhaveastrongdesiretosucceed.Fsomethedesireisthanthatoftheaveragepeople.greatgreaterInfacteveryon

15、ewantstobesuccessfulveryfewarewillingtopaythepriceofhard.Successsobutwkingwkisanattitudehasnosecrets.Itallwithyourbeliefsystem.Yourbeliefsystemstartswithreallyrealstartstartsyoufeelaboutyourself.Youmustatfirstbelieveinyo

16、urself.Onyourjourneytosuccessyouwillfindwhathowthattherearenoshtcuts.Youwillneverbeabletocompletelymastereverydetailofyourlife.AttemptAttemptingtodosowillonlyleadtodisappointment.Besidesitsnecessaryyoutohavecleargoals.Yo

17、udbetteroffputyourgoalsonpaperwheretheyarevisiblesothattheycanhelptomonityourprogress.∧down或∧down答案：3ItwassnowingheavilyMondaymning.LiHuawasatthebusstopfBusNo.601to∧onwaitedwaitinggotoschool.Afterwhilethebuscameshegotoni

18、t.Theremanypassengersinthebus.theaarewereSomeweretalkingsomewerelookingoutofthewindows.Suddenlythebusstopped.Thedriverturnedbutwhilearoundsaid“Sry.Thebushasbeenbrokendown.Pleasegetoffhelppushthebus.”WhenwetheyheardthisLi

19、Huatheothergotoffthebus.Theywkedtogetherpushingthebuspassengerpassengershardlyhardslowly.Soonthebuswasrunningagain.Allthepassengersweresmilingthesunwasbackwardfwardshining.答案：4MyfriendTonyIalwayswalkhometogetherafterscho

20、ol.LastFridayonourwaytohomeweheardaloudshoutbehindus.Whenwelookedaroundtoseewhathadhappenedwefoundawomanontheliedlyinggroundbleeding.Wesoonrealizedthatshehadknockeddownbythecarinfrontof.We∧beenhimherhurriedtohelpheramanc