江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文summary-技巧

1、Summary writing,Learning objectives : 1. To have a better understanding of the elements of a summary; 2.To learn and be able to write a satisfactory summary.,Summary writing(約30個(gè)詞概括),概要:約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2

2、分,抄襲原文材料為無(wú)效要點(diǎn)；改變句式表達(dá)方式，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不認(rèn)定為抄襲。,讀寫(xiě)作文寫(xiě)好summary 的意義,第一段是定調(diào)子，閱卷老師往往讀完第一段就已經(jīng)打出基本分了。 ---高考閱卷老師 相對(duì)于寫(xiě)作的其他要求來(lái)說(shuō)，這一部分較難寫(xiě)，這一部分先讀后概括，而其他部分都是有中文提綱的。

3、 ---往屆實(shí)驗(yàn)班考生,What is a Summary?,A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.,以約30個(gè)詞概括主要內(nèi)容,A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days co

4、mplaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!” “Listen,” said the fox,

5、“each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can’t you just be happy about

6、what you have already got?”,人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài),The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have

7、 already got.,feels,comforts,you,you,過(guò)多細(xì)節(jié),In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with

8、 it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what he didn’t possess.,53 words,直接引語(yǔ),A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perf

9、ect, each one should be happy about what you have got.”,--------------------------- ----------------------------------------------- --------------------------- ---------------------------,,過(guò)早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn),Each of us has strength

10、s and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .,----------------------------------------------

11、--------------------------------,A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.,dos and don’ts,,1、注意人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)正確；2、不寫(xiě)過(guò)多

12、細(xì)節(jié):實(shí)行精“兵”裁“員” 3、不用直接引語(yǔ)；4、不能過(guò)早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)；5、不可完全照抄原文；6、不可加入自己的觀點(diǎn)；7. 思路清晰，巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞增強(qiáng)文章的 連貫性。,Styles of passage,,,,,,2015高考作文,1.記敘文,寫(xiě)作方法：串聯(lián)要素法六個(gè)要素：who; when; where; what; how; why某人做了某事, 結(jié)果如何？The passage mainly t

13、alks about….,This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.,（1）對(duì)象、性質(zhì)功用、利好（2）問(wèn)題、解決方法（3）現(xiàn)象、

14、原因、結(jié)果,2、說(shuō)明文及新聞報(bào)道,koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.,Koalas in wildlife

15、parks can’t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists’ behavior illegal to protect the animals.,Practice,Passage A (2014年江蘇高考作文),Today, more and more English wor

16、ds find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.,With English words getting popular

17、 in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two

18、0;opposing groups:“For” and “Against”,三要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)、論證。文章結(jié)構(gòu)：總分結(jié)構(gòu)、分總結(jié)構(gòu)、 平行結(jié)構(gòu)。,3、議論文,Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that

19、 if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the

20、 freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morni

21、ng exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. How

22、ever, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will

23、certainly benefit a lot from it.,,,,,,,,,,1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):,Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance,2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences),a better memory a healt

24、hier body a better preparation for the day,3. Conclusion/suggestions.,a good habit / benefit a lot,Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healt

25、hier body and better preparation for the day.,Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spread from the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more

26、 technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work together. Anyone who has ever b

27、een to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group.

28、Because teamwork is required by many organizations today, they will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals.,Teamwork,required by,There are seven important sk

29、ills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows:Listening---listen and allow people to freely express their ideas.Questioning---ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team

30、.Persuading---encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas.Respecting---treat others with respect and to support their ideas.Helping---help one’s partners, this is the general theme of teamwork.Shari

31、ng---share ideas and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork.Participating---all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team.,skills,The passage states the importance of teamwork i

32、n business and that, in a more competitive world, people must co-operate in order to achieve their goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described.,Q1：圖文并茂的讀寫(xiě)歸納要涉及圖嗎？,審題看圖畫(huà)或圖表的作用漫畫(huà)通?？珊雎詧D表看作用，有時(shí)不可忽略,,,,,2015高

33、考作文,,,,,,Think：2015高考的這幅圖在文字中體現(xiàn)了嗎？,,Tip1,多個(gè)并列語(yǔ)段只要找出其共性 主題， 為某一段落服務(wù)的插圖 可不涉及。,Model 1: Topic + support,The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’

34、s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.(2015高考范文）,觀察一下圖文的關(guān)系,蘇州2016,2015高考作文的翻版,Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally differen

35、t meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of the author are typical examples.,蘇州2016,The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green t

36、ea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu.“

37、It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.The survey collected 2,047 questionaire

38、s from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were ind

39、icated in the following chart.,,讀寫(xiě)讀寫(xiě)先讀后寫(xiě),The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing In

40、stitute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu.,“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different un

41、derstanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.,The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan

42、 and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.,,Think：以上的三段文字和圖之間是什么關(guān)系？,圖表中的內(nèi)容在文章中

43、體現(xiàn)了嗎？要寫(xiě)嗎？,Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2,The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 201

44、6.,Q2 summary如何踩點(diǎn),抓住主題句中心詞理清邏輯關(guān)系不遺漏信息,但決不羅嗦有概括性思考，但決不畫(huà)蛇添足,簡(jiǎn)約而不簡(jiǎn)單,simplicity but not simple,The examiner will assess the ability of the candidate to use a variety of tenses correctly, a range of vocabulary and spell

45、words accurately and use vocabulary and grammar to express points. He/she will also check to see whether you have a suitable layout and logic ordering of points. Using correct connectives to link points will aid coherenc

46、e and cohesion(連貫與銜接). So spare no effort to polish up your English.,Assignment：,Polish up the summary writing .,Good luck!,Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2,A survey conducted recently shows that the panda is what can