高中英語(yǔ)作文教學(xué)

1、英語(yǔ)寫作講解,高考作文類型：,A. 數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明類文章B. 提示議論文類文章C. 看圖說(shuō)話類文章,影響高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)得分的幾個(gè)因素1.語(yǔ)篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語(yǔ)言是否得體。3.是否使用高級(jí)詞匯4.是否使用復(fù)雜句5 .卷面整潔,書寫工整,,寫作基本步驟：仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。２．圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫出句子。３．添加過(guò)度，確保連貫。４．先求正確，再求靈活。５．認(rèn)真眷寫，卷面整潔。,現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時(shí)節(jié)。你校

2、學(xué)生以“高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”展開了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果，寫一篇短文。,How to write a good composition,,,Introduction (topic),Body (supporting ideas),Conclusion,,,,Can you list the outline of the writing?,The outline of the writing:,Conclusion para

3、graph: …,Introduction paragraph: …,,Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三學(xué)生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）討論（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接觸自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鮮空氣（ breathe some fresh air ）

4、精神放松（relax themselves ）大腦休息（rest their brains ）高考臨近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）沒心情玩（don’t feel like going ）耽誤學(xué)習(xí)(waste the time)3.conclusion: in my opinion…,,Key words:中學(xué)生middle school students

5、身體差in a poor state of healthIn bad condition充足的睡眠enough sleep加強(qiáng)鍛煉，增加戶外活動(dòng)take more exercise and do more outdoor activities定時(shí)吃飯少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat less non-staplefood.講衛(wèi)生,,Form/develop the habit of

6、hygiene,主題句的內(nèi)容要明確具體，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，開門見山，句式力爭(zhēng)多樣性,How will you start you passage?問句： … …從句： … …Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.,巧用過(guò)

7、渡句，過(guò)渡詞，理順文章的邏輯關(guān)系,Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question.,What will you say？Your answer？,The body part,Point1: 65%的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%)

8、hold the opinion that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to …Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.,Reason1：接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康,Sentence pattern: They think it go

9、od to do sth……/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth…… Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air,Reason 2:活動(dòng)是精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí),（注意：兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間的連接

10、）遞進(jìn)what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.,Conclusion: 小段總結(jié)，進(jìn)一步亮明觀點(diǎn)，前后呼應(yīng)。,Eg: They think it will do

11、 good to their students.,,Point 2:３５％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）注意：使用過(guò)渡句，自然銜接句子和段落（承上啟下）Sentence pattern:However, others prefer to…Some others have just the opposite opinion…..On the other hand…. Eg: On the other hand, about

12、35% students are against the idea.,,Reason 1:高考臨近，沒有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion… that….Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywh

13、ere.,,Reason 2:春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí) （注意：兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間的連接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,Whether or not shoul

14、d Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good

15、 for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their stu

16、dents. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take

17、 at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,,表示觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類寫作套語(yǔ),A.總起: Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposite opinion

18、s. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards … People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)一: …of them hold the opinion that …. …of them are in

19、 favor of the idea that… People who are for the idea think …,,C.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)之間的銜接:However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it don’t think so. However, every coi

20、n has two sides. Different from those…., …people think ….On the other hand, … people think ….D.結(jié)尾常用套語(yǔ): In my opinion/Personally, … As far as I’m concerned, …In short/ in brief/ in a word, …,Whether or not should S

21、enior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good fo

22、r their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their studen

23、ts. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at

24、 least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.,Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that,On the other hand, about 35

25、% students are,against the idea.,,表列舉說(shuō)明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞:Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly… Thirdly…In the first place… In the second place… In the third place… Finally/ Last but not least/, ....表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

26、.... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divid

27、ed on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they

28、can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that wit

29、h college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attenti

30、on on their studies.,Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that,On the other hand, about 35% students are,against the idea.,what’s more,,Besides,A、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)B、增加形容詞或副詞C、靈活運(yùn)用各種句

31、型,亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring

32、 outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think i

33、t will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think go

34、ing spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.,be close to,energetic,feel,like going,afford,fix their,attention on,heated,fresh,,,