高中英語寫作

1、月考寫作講解,作文題目：,國慶節(jié)剛過，相信同學(xué)們在國慶節(jié)期間都玩得很開心。現(xiàn)在請以“My National Day”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字。要點如下： 1. 國慶節(jié)是和誰，在哪里，怎樣度過的； 2. 國慶節(jié)期間的感受； 3. 國慶節(jié)的意義。,一、審題,1. 體裁: ___________ 2. 人稱: ___________3. 時態(tài):______________________

2、4. 詞數(shù): __________ 5. 標(biāo)題: ______________6. 要點: _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________,My National Day,1、去哪里，和誰，怎樣度過節(jié)日,不少于80詞,第一人稱I,主：過去時 輔：現(xiàn)在時,記

3、敘文,2、國慶節(jié)期間的感受,3、國慶節(jié)的意義,二、謀篇布局,Heading：_____________________________Body：________________________________End：_________________________________,介紹節(jié)日，說明描述國慶節(jié)期間的感受,要點一：哪里，和誰，怎樣度過國慶節(jié),要點三：國慶節(jié)的意義,三、譯寫單句,要點一：國慶節(jié)是和誰，在哪里，怎樣度過的

4、。,1、10月1日，我去茅臺（或者楠竹林公園）看風(fēng)景。2、10月2日，我和初中同學(xué)聚會，并且在一家餐館吃了很美味的食物。3、其余時間，我和父母回到爺爺奶奶家，待在家里幫助他們做一些家務(wù)。,三、譯寫單句,1. On October 1st, I went to MaoTai (or Nan Zhulin park) to see the beautiful scenery. 2. On October 2nd, I stayed w

5、ith my junior middle school classmates and we ate a lot of delicious food. 3. During the rest days of the vacation, my parents and I went back to my grandparent’s home. I stayed at home and helped them do some housework

6、.,三、譯寫單句,要點二：國慶節(jié)期間的感受。,1、快樂高興，因為有七天假期I felt very happy because I had seven days to relax myself.,三、譯寫單句,要點三、國慶節(jié)的意義,1、國慶節(jié)是一個偉大的節(jié)日，它標(biāo)志著中國變得越來越強大。2、國慶節(jié)讓全家人團聚在一起，這很有意義,三、譯寫單句,要點三、國慶節(jié)的意義,1. The National Day is a great holid

7、ay. It means China is becoming stronger and stronger.2. The National day offers us a time to stay together and relax ourselves. This is meaningful.,四、連句成篇,It was the National Day last week. I felt very happy because I

8、had seven days to enjoy myself. On October 1st, I went to Maotai (or Nan Zhulin park) to see the beautiful scenery. On October 2nd, I stayed with my junior middle school classmates and we ate a lot of delicious food. D

9、uring the rest days of the vacation, my parents and I went back to my grandparent’s home. I stayed at home and helped them do some housework.,四、連句成篇,The National Day is a great holiday. It means China is becoming stronge

10、r and stronger. The National day offers us a time to stay together and relax ourselves. This is meaningful.,五、檢查潤色,Ways to improve your composition.1、在合適的地方加上套話或句型；2、巧妙使用起承轉(zhuǎn)合連接成分；3、巧妙使用高級詞匯或短語。,五、檢查潤色,第一段： It was

11、the National Day last week. I felt very happy because I had seven days to enjoy myself.,As is known to us/As we all know （眾所周知）,,五、檢查潤色,On October 1st, I went to ( ) Maotai (or Nan Zhulin park) to see （

12、 ）the beautiful scenery. On October 2nd ( ), I stayed with ( ) my junior middle school classmates and we ate ( ) a lot of delicious food. During the rest days

13、of the vacation, my parents and I went back to my grandparent’s home. I stayed at home and helped them do some housework.,travelled to,enjoy,the next day,spent the whole day with,tasted,五、檢查潤色,第三段：

14、 the National Day is a great holiday. It means China is becoming stronger and stronger. the National day offers us a time not only to stay together but also relax ourselves, which is m