英語四級(jí)模擬作文

1、英語四級(jí)模擬作文英語四級(jí)模擬作文例一：例一：PartPartⅠWritingWritingDirections:Directions:Fthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledMaltingMaltingFriendsFriendsOnlineOnline.Youshouldwriteatleast120wdsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinC

2、hinese:1.1網(wǎng)上交友現(xiàn)象越來截止普遍。2這種做法有利有弊。3我的建議。答案:[高分作文]Withawidevarietyofvirtualcommunicationtoolsspringinguplikemushroomsmakingfriendsonlinehasbecomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthepastdecade.Thischannelofcommunicationenablespeo

3、pletogetacquaintedwithcyberfriendsfromanywherewithoutanylimitationsenrichingtheirlifeexperiencesevenextendingtheirknowledge.WhatsmeitisnotrarefsometofindtheirbosomfriendsevenMr.Mrs.Right.Butasadoubleedgedswdmakingfriends

4、withoutphysicallymeetingeachotherundoubtedlyhasevilstragediesoccurwhencyberfriendsfinallydecidetodate.Notcomingsinglybutinpairssomespousesgetdivcedbecauseonepartyfallsinlovewithcyberlovers.Thewkrenderspeopleconvenienteff

5、icientmeanstogetintouchwiththerestofthewldweshouldmakegooduseofitinsteadoffallingvictimstoit.[評(píng)析]這是一篇以分析某現(xiàn)象的利弊為主的說明文。第一段用一句話說明了隨著各種各樣的(awidevarietyof)虛擬通信工具如雨后春筍般涌現(xiàn)(springinguplikemushrooms)，網(wǎng)上交友在過去十年里(overthepastdecade)

6、變得越來越(increasingly)流行。with引導(dǎo)的名詞doing結(jié)構(gòu)是表示原因的經(jīng)典用法。第二段用Whatsme連接了兩個(gè)好處。其中的亮點(diǎn)詞匯有：enablepeopletogetacquaintedwith“使人們結(jié)識(shí)……”；enrichingexperiences“豐富經(jīng)驗(yàn)”和extendingknowledge“拓寬知識(shí)面”兩個(gè)短語用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語；itisnotrare表示“并不罕見”，比itiscommon更有力

7、；bosomfriends“知心朋友”；MrMrs.Right“另一半；心上人”。第三段話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，利用比喻“就像一把雙刃劍(asadoubleedgedswd)”，引出了壞處。成語Notcomingsinglybutinpairs“無獨(dú)有偶”的前后講了兩個(gè)壞處，恰恰與前一段的兩個(gè)好處形成對(duì)比。最后一段簡(jiǎn)潔地發(fā)出呼吁：網(wǎng)絡(luò)給我們提供了便利、高效的接觸外界的手段，1.1你認(rèn)為在英語學(xué)習(xí)過程中存在的主要問題是什么？2導(dǎo)致這些問題的原因有哪些？

8、3對(duì)于解決這些問題，你有何建議？ItItisisobviousobviousthattherearesomeproblemsincollegeEnglishlearning.InmyopinionsomethingmostdiscouragingisthatmanystudentsfinddifficultyincommunicatingwithanativespeakeralthoughtheyhavelearnedEnglishfm

9、anyyears.ThereTherearearetwotworeasonsreasonsexplainingexplainingthisthisphenomenon.phenomenon.FirstlymostofthestudentsevenmanyteachersofEnglishpaylittleattentiontotheuseofthelanguage.TothemthemostimptantthingoflearningE

10、nglishistomemizesomegrammaticalrulesenlargethevocabulary.SecondlymanystudentshavenotrealizedtherealpurposeoflearningEnglish.TheyholdthattheystudyEnglishtopasstestsnottomasterausefultoolftheirownuse.ToTochangechangethisth

11、issituationsituationmysuggestionisthatmeemphasisbeputonimprovingcommunicativeabilitiesinEnglish.FFexampleexamplewhynotadvocatethatthelisteningspeakingshouldbeincludedinthetestofEnglishatvariouslevels[評(píng)析]作文首先直接提出英語學(xué)習(xí)中存在的問

12、題，即經(jīng)過多年英語學(xué)習(xí)之后，學(xué)生依然不能用英語進(jìn)行交流。第二段揭示并分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的兩個(gè)原因。主題句為：Therearetworeasonsexplainingthisphenomenon擴(kuò)展句的主要內(nèi)容：一是對(duì)語言運(yùn)用的學(xué)習(xí)不夠重視；二是學(xué)習(xí)英語的目的只是為了通過考試。最后提出解決問題而且現(xiàn)實(shí)可行的建議，用問句結(jié)尾，引起閱卷老師對(duì)本文的注意。本文的語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，三個(gè)段落的過渡自然。文章開頭句子明確提出問題Itisobvioustha

13、ttherearesomeproblemsincollegeEnglishlearning，第二段首句提出產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因有兩個(gè)Therearetworeasonsexplainingthisphenomenon，末段的首句用Tochangethissituation來承接上文，最后用fexample引出自己的建議。例四：Directions:Directions:Fthispartyouareallowed30minutestowr

14、iteanessayentitledCheatingCheatingononCampusCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wdsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1在大學(xué)里存在著考試作弊的現(xiàn)象；2你是怎么看待這一現(xiàn)象的；3如何才能制止這種現(xiàn)象。答案:[高分作文]Cheatingonexamsisbecomingaseriousproblemoncampus.23