2012年浙江省高考英語主觀題部分評卷信息反饋與思考

1、,你校正在進行“英語讀書周”活動。該活動要求學生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。請按下列要求用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文：1.針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；2.舉例說明理由。注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。In the English Reading Week, one o

2、f my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this:" Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you." _____________________________________________________________________,題目內容要點分析,,,I am q

3、uitely agree with the view.Confidence attaches great significance to our future because life is mostly based on ourselves .Actually, the life likes test.Therefore, I believe by harding work, I will achieve my dream.

4、The quote is short, but it leave a deep impress to me and make me think a lot. In my opinion, environment, parents, friends and so on do have a great influence to us.We always dream to be successful.We must will need t

5、eachers’help,friends’ encouragement, parents’love.,,2012年浙江省高考英語主觀題部分評卷信息反饋與思考,浙江省溫州二中 黃躍躍,,評卷程序概述主觀題部分評卷情況反饋與分析對高中英語教學的幾點建議,一、評卷程序概述,評卷教師構成評卷質量保證可能調整評分標準 （要點是否齊全）,二、主觀題部分評卷情況反饋與分析,歷年試題難度,,Two years before, I trave

6、lled to Brazil and I rented for a car. agoUnfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car and I needed Unfortunately,to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents

7、 weeks , so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will but

8、 wouldbe worried about myself because I was so farther away, and me farthat my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them i

9、nterested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a interestingresult, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.,短文改錯,,,,the,《新概念英語2》special difficulties,,你校正在進行“英語讀書周”活動。該活動要求學生摘錄名言佳句（quote

10、）并相互交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。請按下列要求用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文：1.針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；2.舉例說明理由。注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote

11、to us, which goes like this:" Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you." _____________________________________________________________________,題目內容要點分析,,1）“五檔”評分標準注意內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性、上下文的連貫性

12、。第五檔（25-30分）血肉骨氣備之第四檔（ 19-24分）云而通之第三檔（13-18分）知所云，但未周之第二檔（7-12分）知所欲云，然未能云第一檔（1-6分）不知所云 （黃會健）2）詞數(shù)、拼寫與標點符號、書寫,評判標準,,書面表達整體分析,,試題難度：1）題目指導語不夠明確 2）開放度較高 3）任務缺乏情景創(chuàng)設的真實性

13、 4）學生對主題內容體驗不夠（賴朝暉） 學生： 1）缺乏良好的審題習慣，沒有深度理解題意。 2）缺乏舉例說明或說理、舉例背離主題。 3）缺乏個性看法和追求獨立思考的能力， 思維停滯。 4）缺乏語篇能力和整合語言的能力。 5）背套路；硬套范文；使用不靈活，舉例不合理，不能自

14、圓其說,考生失分原因分析,,動詞句子結構混亂或錯誤漢語式英語拼寫錯誤派生詞使用錯誤 （success succeed successful）代詞連接詞誤用、濫用套句說空話、無思維,考生語言失分錯例收集與分析,,1.認真研讀《課程標準》和《考試說明》，注重思維能力與習慣的培養(yǎng)和語言的訓練相結合。 “使用語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊”注重認知能力、言語信息、情感策略、文化意識等的培養(yǎng)充分利用教材,三、對高

15、中英語教學的幾點建議,,欣賞借鑒模仿,文章立意 文章結構修辭手法 佳句欣賞難句解析 銜接語運用,MIUI FriendshipReading : Anne’s best friend,Appreciate all the words or expressions in terms of the “description of surroundings” in the diary.

16、Divide these words or expressions in two catalogues and tell the reasonAppreciate all the descriptions about Anne’s feelings.What can be inferred from the description of Anne’s feelings?Write a short diary in the nam

17、e of Anne, describing nature in Anne’s eyes and her deep feelings if Anne regained freedom after the war.,,2.重視寫作教學；落實寫作訓練循序漸進積累語言 --- 篩選、講解、情境創(chuàng)設、鞏固背誦范文、美文針對性訓練語言運用實際 eg: 記敘事件明確記敘文和事件記敘文的要素了解記敘文應注意點羅列常用表達 （如 時間