英語續(xù)寫素材整理

1、續(xù)寫素材整理1Whatisaclimaxofasty（什么是故事高潮）Metension=satisfyingclimax文學故事中的高潮（climax）故事的主要場景（keyscene）也通常是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點（turningpoint），是指故事達到最緊張或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有時候是劇情中的“危機“點。有時候它只是達到關(guān)鍵時刻或者轉(zhuǎn)折點發(fā)生了一些事情或者主角必須做出決定從而導致一個結(jié)果或其他。我們在分析敘事類故事或者小說故事的時候

2、常常用下面的圖表來表示故事情節(jié)。常見故事高潮示例：1.Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingfherlostdog.Allofasuddenshehearsabarkcomingfromaroundthecnershelooksaroundtosee...2.Kevinhaswkedveryhardtotryoutfthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalistofthisyea

3、rsteammembersonhisofficedo.Kevinwalksfwardtolookatthelist....3.Marysparentshavebeendiscussingwhethernottomovetoanotherstate.TheycallMaryhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision...4.Loishasperfmedinthestategymnastics

4、finals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthewinners.Theannouncersays“firstplacegoesto...“文學名著中的一些故事高潮1.ThedeathsofRomeo(whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead)Juliet(whokillsherselfwhensheawakesseesRomeodead).RomeoJul

5、ietShakespeare（羅密歐和朱麗葉，莎士比亞）2.WhenGastonthetownspeoplecometoattackthebeastBelleadmitsherlovefthebeast.BeautytheBeastDisney（美女與野獸，迪士尼）3.In“TheThreeLittlePigs“suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigthewolf.

6、Thisconfrontationistheclimax.（三只小豬）Howtocreateaclimaxofasty(如何營造故事的高潮？)方法1.增加外部沖突增加外部沖突是一種明顯有效的可以達到故事高潮的方式。沖突帶來緊迫感將故事推向必要的解決或崩潰。1）角色之間的沖突(人物觀點差異競爭需要等)如：2017年11月浙江英語高考：Onthefourthfifthnightwehadtroublefindingahotelwithava

7、cancy.AfterdrivinginvainfsometimeMomsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidntwefindahouse續(xù)寫素材整理3Theflowersnodded.Snowflakesdanced.Thundergrumbled.Fogcreptin.Thewindhowled.Thehauntedhouseseemedtostareatmebeckoningmetowardsthedo.Tech

8、nique2:simile(明喻)Deionpurpose:SimileslikenssomethingtosomethingelsegivingamedetaileddeionExamples：Thenightskywasasdarkasthedeepestocean.Thestarssparkledlikediamonds.Thesnakemovedlikearippleonapond.Technique3:metaph(暗喻)De

9、ionpurpose:MetaphssaythatsomethingissomethingelsegivingthedeionmepowerExamples：Awaveofterrwashedoverhim.Technique4:Vividadjectives(生動的形容詞)Deionpurpose:Tomakethestymeinterestingvividbyusingmeimaginativedeionssometimesinal

10、istExamples：GleamingglisteningwhisperyflakesofsnowTechnique5:Negativedeion(否定描述)Deionpurpose:TotellthereaderwhatisnotthereisaneffectivewayofshowinghowunpleasantcomftlessaplaceisExamples：Therewasnocushionnocarpetnowarmthn

11、olightnocomft.Technique6:Camerapanzoom(攝影全景放大)Deionpurpose:TousetheideaofhowafilmdirectwksyoucangiveawiderviewthenfocusinononedetailExamples：Fromthewitheringtreeshelookedpastthelitteredfarmyardacrosstothedecrepithovel.It

12、sdoshungsadlyawrythehlebroken.Technique7:Nounsfdetails(細節(jié)名詞)Deionpurpose:Scenesarefilledwiththingsthatweseetherefeuseslotsofnounsevenlistsofnounstoconveywhatisthere.Examples：Theroomswerecrowdedwithlanternsfastenedonoakpa