[學(xué)習(xí)]高中英語教師培訓(xùn)課件：高考英語書面表達(dá)閱卷情況分析及啟

1、高考英語書面表達(dá)閱卷情況分析及啟示,本次高考閱卷特點(diǎn)： 1.閱卷的速度快； 2. 閱卷時間長； 3.閱卷老師的心理狀態(tài)： 4. 高考卷其余部分較淺；,給分中庸,平均分：峰值：,約13分,17~18分,最吃虧學(xué)生群：,中等左右學(xué)生,,書面表達(dá)是提高平均分最大的潛力股,影響給分的四大因素：,一. 作文的卷面；,二. 文中所采用的語言材料的層次；,三. 行文的流暢度；,四. 文章的思想性；,一. 作文的卷面；,漂亮的書寫是寫作得分

2、的亮點(diǎn),建議 I：,1. 高三各次考試中打卷面分；,2.大張旗鼓地組織學(xué)生練書法；,3. 提供標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的考試用紙;,二. 文中所采用的語言材料的層次；,人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝,A. 詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；,B. 句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用靈活多變;,good2. think3. in my opinion,perfect. excellent. outstanding promising favorable …,hold t

3、he view that … it is widely shared that …it is universally acknowledged that …,for my part ，from my own perspective,4. more and more5. remember6.for example7. helpful,keep in mind,an increasing number of

4、a growing number of,to name only a few,beneficial, rewarding,1. 充分利用課文；,建議 II：,2. 鼓勵同學(xué)平時重視優(yōu)美語句 的收集和欣賞；,3. 從日常講解作文做起；,Destination every now and then; …get the itch to …; …feel the urge to… ; …stretch itse

5、lf lazily along…; …give a glimpse of; … a walk through … is a history lesson; Few visitors leave …feeling disappointed. …is a paradise for …; a feast for the eye; a wide variety of,三. 行文的流暢度,上下貫通、一氣

6、呵成,建議 III：,2. 組織學(xué)生歸納各種功能的連詞， 組建“連詞庫”,1. 突出文章段落中的主題句；,Some examples：,意義上承上啟下的連詞： What’s more, moreover, at the same time, then, besides, in addition, furthermore,意義轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞：

7、however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, in other words, by the way …,四．文章思想性的體現(xiàn),“萬能模板”現(xiàn)象：新八股文,08年上海卷書面表達(dá)：Guided Writing你班將組隊(duì)參加學(xué)校組織的集體舞比賽（group dancing competition)，班長希望大家積極參加。對此談?wù)勀愕目捶āＤ?/p>

8、的文章必須包括以下內(nèi)容：?你是否會參加比賽?你做出該決定的具體理由,08年廣東卷書面表達(dá)：學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生交流活動，你參加其中的“大學(xué)校園生活”討論。聽完Mike的發(fā)言之后，你準(zhǔn)備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1. 以約30個詞概括Mike的發(fā)言要點(diǎn)；2. 然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活， 內(nèi)容包括： (1) 對中

9、學(xué)生活的感受；(2) 理想的大學(xué)生活； (3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打 算如何適應(yīng)。,四．文章思想性的體現(xiàn),“萬能模板”現(xiàn)象：新八股文,建議 IV：,有思路，有活路,補(bǔ)充： 1. 避免低級錯誤，尤其寫好首尾段；,2. 對高考最后一段時間書面表達(dá)輔導(dǎo)的 認(rèn)識;,高考29分高分作文欣賞 There are basically two ways to get work d

10、one. One way is working individually and the other is working in a team. Of course, they each have their own characteristics. The former, working individually, can allow people to do things in whatever ways they like

11、. Besides, people can also solve problems by themselves. The latter, however, is quite different.,It requires team spirit. As is known to all, two heads are better than one. Many people can talk over problems together. W

12、hat’s more, people can learn from each other in team work. Personally, I prefer to combine them together. Because working individually can help me build up my ability to stand on my own feet while working in a team g

13、ives me a chance to acquire experience from others. (129 words. ),26分作文鑒賞There are basically two ways to get work done. Namely, working individually and working in a team. Each of them has its own advantages. The for

14、mer one, that is，working individually, is a very way to develop one’s DIY ability. People make arrangement and solve problems by themselves, which will contribute to the,forming of personality of independence.The latter

15、 shows exactly the immense power of cooperation. People discuss together and learn from each other. And any problems can be overcome more effectively and efficiently. In terms of me, I prefer the latter one. As an old

16、 saying goes, three minds make a giant. Also it is easy to imagine that one person might be willing in mind, but weak in muscle. So to work in a team is a wiser preference. （132 words）,小結(jié)： 1. 整潔的卷面； -----氣派門面 2.