2018年大學(xué)生英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽知識(shí)點(diǎn)整理之作文篇

1、2018年英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽知識(shí)點(diǎn)整理之作文篇范文范文ThePrimaryEnergyConsumptionintheUnitedStatesinChinain2011①ThetwopietsaboveshowtheprimaryenergyconsumptionintheUnitedStatesinChinain2011respectively.（作文開(kāi)篇直接點(diǎn)出話題，給出了信息，完成了說(shuō)明文開(kāi)頭的主要任務(wù)。）②Thefirsttdescrib

2、esthesituationofenergyconsumptioninChina.Itindicatesthatcoalisthedominantenergyconsumptionaccountingf70percentofthetotalenergyconsumption.Theothertwomajfossilfuelsoilnaturalgastakeup18percent4percentrespectively.Thesethr

3、eekindsoffossilfuelsinaggregatealreadyaccountfover90percentofalltheconsumingenergiesindicatingthatfossilfuelsplayavitalroleinChina’senergyconsumptionintherecentyears.Theremaining8percentofenergyconsumptionincludesnuclear

4、powersomekindsofrenewablesourceslikehydroelectricsoon.Amongthemnuclearpoweraccountsf1percent.Asftherenewablesourceshydroelectrictakesup5percentanother1percenttakenupbyotherrenewablesources.（這一段按照題目要求，描述了圖1的主要特點(diǎn)。而作者突出表現(xiàn)為：

5、能夠基于圖表內(nèi)容進(jìn)一步分析，實(shí)屬難得，例如文中的畫(huà)線部分，把煤、石油、天然氣這三大化石燃料歸納在一起進(jìn)行總結(jié)；分析的層次清晰，詞匯選擇上能注意多樣性，如accountf和takeup的交替使用。）isstillalongwaytogoifChinesepeoplewouldliketowidelypopularizetheexploitationofoilnaturalgasputitintotheirdailyuse.Therefec

6、oalisstillthemostconsumedenergyinChina.AsftheUnitedStatesacountrywithdevelopedindustrializationadvancedtechnologicaltoolspeopletendtoexploitmeoilnaturalgasastheyaremeenvironmentfriendlythancoal.（這一段講了第一點(diǎn)區(qū)別，即中國(guó)和美國(guó)對(duì)于三大化石燃料

7、消耗的差別，在中國(guó)，煤的消耗量占絕大多數(shù)，占70%，而在美國(guó)，只有22%，而石油和天然氣占較大比例，并結(jié)合兩國(guó)國(guó)情差異，分析出可能的原因。分析合理，邏輯清晰。）⑥SecondlyitisevidenttoseethatthenuclearpowerconsumptionoftheUnitedStatesoccupiesmuchalargerpercentagethanthatofChina.Thereasonsareasfollows:

8、fonethingthedevelopmentofnuclearenergyintheUnitedStatesisacceleratingtakesthefirstpositioninthewldfanotheritisrelevantwithChinesepolicy.ChinesegovernmenthaveclaimedthattheonlypurposefChina’sdevelopingnuclearweaponsistode

9、fendbreakthenuclearblackmailundernocircumstanceswouldChinesepeopleusenuclearweaponsfirst.（這一段講了第二點(diǎn)區(qū)別，就是中美兩國(guó)對(duì)核能消耗情況的對(duì)比，結(jié)合美國(guó)發(fā)達(dá)的開(kāi)發(fā)核能源技術(shù)和中國(guó)對(duì)待核武器的態(tài)度進(jìn)行分析產(chǎn)生這種情況的原因。）⑦Inawdthetsindicatethedistributionofprimaryenergyconsumptionin