浙江英語新題型讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作練習(xí)及答案

1、寫作是四項語文技能中不可分割的一個重要部分，更是語言生成能力的重要表現(xiàn)形式。該部分要求考生考生根據(jù)題示進行書面表達(dá)?？忌鷳?yīng)能：(1)準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯語言的準(zhǔn)確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個重要方面，因為它直接或間接地影響到信息的準(zhǔn)確傳輸。應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確程度是寫作部分評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的一項重要內(nèi)容。(2)使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思任何一篇文章都需要有一個主題作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、連貫地

2、表達(dá)自己的思想。浙江卷寫作第二節(jié)，讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作，兩種形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。讀后續(xù)寫。寫。提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1.與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；2.內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所給關(guān)鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；3.應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；4.上下文的連貫性。概

3、要寫作。概要寫作。提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。閱卷時主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1.對原文要點的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2.應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3.上下文的連貫性；4.對各要點表達(dá)的獨立性情況。樣題樣題第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytowkoneday.

4、AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBankheheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedwried.Arthurstoppedasked“Itlooks

5、likeyou’vegotaproblem”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatthensaid，”Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtroub

6、le，youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotouttookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitonthegroundheturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcasest

7、artedwalkingheheardthelougnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(搶劫)!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefe.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedthepasseng

8、ersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother“Whathappened？”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.第二節(jié):概要寫作（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Gettingridofdirtintheopinionofmostpeopleisagoodthing.Howeverthereisnothingfixeda

9、boutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcenturypeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdiseaseasmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbath

10、s.By1538theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichthepoinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIVKingofFrancewasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtaken

11、abaththekingderedthattoavoidtheattackofdiseasethenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好處）ofdirtwaslonglived，dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbeversincethe18century.Scientificallyspeakingcleaningawaydirt

12、isgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyhwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.YetitseemsthatstardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea：clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhiteclothseve

13、rsoftersurfacestoshine.HasthehatefdirthowevergonetoofarAttitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirsttimeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirtwhichmightberesponsiblefthespreadofdisease.OnthecontraryMa

14、ryRuebush，Americanimmunologist(免疫學(xué)家），encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.thelatter(后者）positionisgainingsomeground.參選答案：答案：Onepossibleversion：Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.(要點1)Falo

15、ngtimeinhistypeopleofsomeEuropeancountriessuchasFrancebelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.(要點2)Howeverpeoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepus

16、healthy.(要點3)Howeversomescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.(要點4)評分原則：1.本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據(jù)所寫概要的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后紿分。3.詞敗少于40的和多于80的，從總分中減去2分。4.評分時，應(yīng)主要從以下四個方面考慮：(1)對原文