第十五講高分作文的寫作模2

1、第十五講第十五講高分作文的寫作模式高分作文的寫作模式三、四六級作文的謀篇布局謀篇布局(1)將提示的第一句作為文章的第一句將提示的第三句作為第一段的最后一句將提示的第二句展開成文章的中心段落結(jié)論段歸納概括，提出建議。例證標題：CityLifeSuburbanLife提綱：1)最近幾年越來越多的人遷往近郊居住2）城市生活和近郊生活各有特點3）比較起來，我喜歡的是……Inrecentyearsmemehomesarebeingpushedou

2、twardsastheactivitiesofbusinessgovernmentpleasuretendtobeconcentratedinthecentersofthecities.AlthoughmostpeoplearereluctanttomovetotheoutskirtsofthecitiesIfeellikelivinginthesuburbs.Itistruethatthecitycanprovidemuchconve

3、nienceentertainmenttheveryreasonwhypeoplecantbeartopartwithcitylife.Butthecostftheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.Whatsmethereismegasnoisepollutioninthecitywhichisfullofpetrolfumestoxicgasestnbytheroarofbusestaxiest

4、hrongedceaselesslybygreatcrowds.Incontrastlivingnearthecountrysideonecanenjoythecleanatmospheretheclosenesstonaturethequietpeacefulsurroundingstheessentialsofahealthylife.Althoughlivinginthesuburbsonemaysufferalittledisc

5、omftbroughtaboutbythenecessityoftravelingmilestowkeverydayitmeansnearlynothingwhenthinkingofthehighcostheavilypollutedenvironmentofthecity.Thenewsuburbanlifeisfastbecomingapredominantpatternoflivinginmostcitieswiththeimp

6、rovementoftraffictheperfectionofservicesitwillprovetoholdgreatsuperiityovercitylife.謀篇布局（2）根據(jù)話題加引段，于段尾提出自己的觀點（也就是提示中的第三句要求內(nèi)容）將提示的第一句和第二句寫成文章的中心段落根據(jù)文章的敘述重點，總結(jié)全文，提出方法等。例證標題：MyViewonCollegeStudentsParttimeJobs提綱：1）有人認為大學生做兼

7、職工作很有好處；whenwemeetsomedifficultiesletaloneperfmwonderfuldeeds.Toconcludeallgreatmenachievesuccessthroughdiligencedevotionperseverance.Justasthefamoussayinggoes“Nopainsnogains““Wherethereisawillthereisaway.“謀篇布局（4）將提示中的第一

8、句做為第一段主題句，然后拓展開將提示的第二句做為第二段的主題句，拓展說明將提示的第三句拓展成第三段，但注意與上面兩段的照應，使其有總攬全文的作用例文標題：OnHousingRefm提示：1）舊房屋政策的弊端；2）房改帶來的好處；3）我怎么辦？Theoldhouseallottingpolicyhadatleasttwodisadvantages.Firstthegovernmentspentalotofmoneybuildingsome

9、housesbutthesehouseswereallottedtopeoplefreeofge.Thusthegovernmentwouldhavenomoneytobuildmehousesfpeoplewhobadlyneededthem.Secondthepersonswhowereinpowercouldgetmehousesthanthosewhowerepowerless.Thiswasquiteunfair.Onthec

10、ontrarythenewsystemofhouseallotmentmaybringaboutmanynewthings.Fexamplethegovernmentwillhavememoneywhichcanbeusedinhouseconstruction.Sothehousingindustrycandevelopmequickly.Besidesbecausehouseswillbesoldtopeoplethechances

11、theygetwillbeequal.WhenIenterthesocietyIwouldgetaloanfromthebanktobuymyownhouse.ThenIwouldtrytopaybacktheloanintheshtesttimepossible.AfterthatIwouldproudlyclaim:“NowIamthemasterofthathouse.“謀篇布局（5）將提示中的第一句作為文章的第一段，并提主題；舉