讀后續(xù)寫范文20篇點(diǎn)評(píng)

1、讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（一）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But

2、it was raining heavily that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on t

3、he snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to stand up. At that time, he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without

4、 taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(膽怯地). “Have you killed the

5、 man?” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “At about seven last night.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it ye

6、t?” “No, sir.”The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat(打) him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap(設(shè)陷阱) the farmer into the confession(供認(rèn)), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murdere

7、r(謀殺犯).注意：1. 所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；2. 應(yīng)使用 5 個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；3. ...a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. 后半部分詞作狀語(yǔ)，構(gòu)成懸垂結(jié)構(gòu)。saying 可以換成 decla

8、ring 宣布; saw 可換成witnessed,目擊。4. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! 強(qiáng)調(diào)句，高級(jí)。強(qiáng)調(diào)部分還可以加上否定內(nèi)容使語(yǔ)意更加完整。此處可以用到 It was not... but... that ...或者 It was ... rather than...that ...即：It was not the farmer but t

9、he police officer that killed the man on the snow! 或者It was the police officer rather than the farmer that killed the man on the snow!5. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. 中 took the great courage

10、to 鼓起極大勇氣做某事。6. After the investigation, the young man was right. 建議改為：After investigation,the police found what the young man had said was the truth. 7. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who bea

11、t up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.最后一句可以適當(dāng)加上副詞。Immediately, the police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired. Eventuall

12、y,the poor farmer was released and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（二）I was responding to a call from a small brick flat(用磚做的公寓) in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to

13、pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.When I arrived at 2：30 a.m.， the building was dark except fo

14、r a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances， many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means

15、of transportation.Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door.This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance，I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answere

16、d a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ，like somebody

17、 out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls， no equipment on the